I was exceedingly pleased with the kind of positive feedback that I received on my previous elevator pitch. The only thing that was asked of me to change was that I look at the camera more and try to be more natural, and I think that was completely justified. There was no type of feedback that I thought was outright silly. So that is why I basically only tried to look at the camera more often and try to sound less nervous.
You did a great job on looking at the camera more and try to communicate with your audiences! I think your pitch would have looked better if you were standing up and showing your body gestures as well. Overall, great job though! http://bongjukang.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey great job on your elevator pitch! The only suggestion I have (which the person who commented above me pointed out) you should try standing up and looking the part, as if you were giving this to an audience in real life. Other than that, I don't see any other issues. If you want to check out my elevator pitch, you can here: http://kenny-o.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey, its not wonder you had such good feed back on your elevator pitch because it was very good! I agree with the two comments above that you should look the part, its not too hard just throw on a nice shirt for the recording and this will be perfect!
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ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on looking at the camera more and try to communicate with your audiences! I think your pitch would have looked better if you were standing up and showing your body gestures as well. Overall, great job though! http://bongjukang.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey great job on your elevator pitch! The only suggestion I have (which the person who commented above me pointed out) you should try standing up and looking the part, as if you were giving this to an audience in real life. Other than that, I don't see any other issues. If you want to check out my elevator pitch, you can here: http://kenny-o.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHey, its not wonder you had such good feed back on your elevator pitch because it was very good! I agree with the two comments above that you should look the part, its not too hard just throw on a nice shirt for the recording and this will be perfect!
ReplyDeleteyou can check out my blog at this link http://darby95.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html